Looks good, lots more detail, on this page at least
Should be a fun read with more story added
Now, getting back to where they were so rudely interrupted ;)
Any chance of sticking the old pages in the archive somewhere so people can see what it evolved into ?
Never hide your work, even if you think it's not 'good enough' others still like it.
No, at least not yet... I have a generic archive in the works where I want to put all canceled works, but it will be separated from my main galleries.
It's not that i think it's not good, I don't want to create confusion since it's a story change as well.
As long as they're preserved for posteriorarity ;)
i get it .
but a better name might be "fury tale"